The day started out with my dad and me working on his jeep, but we started to argue and didn’t agree about how the engine goes in it and how we can make it work. We always argued, but the next day we didn’t argue this day so he asked me to go with him to salt lake with him. So we got packed and got the drugs to go to his friends with him. He lat me drive the car to salt lake, we was having a good time.
We got to Provo and we decided to eat and I things to talk about but I didn’t know how to tell him so I put it off. So we ate and then we went and out and spent a lot of money on jewelry, four wheelers and other things that we didn’t need. The day was still good and we finally arrived at his friend’s house and they went to the other room will I stayed out in the living room. I hired yelling and then I seen my dad fall in front of me and his face was all messed up. One of the guys got on top of him and started to hit him so I punched the guy in the face. Then they stared to hit. More and more people stated to hit us and they pulled out their guns and dragged us out side into a alleyway. I thought we were going to die so I decided to tell him.
He finally just flipped out and jumped up and started to hit some of the people and one fell. My dad took his gun and fired at another guy, that’s when they all took off and then he looked at me with the gun in his hand saying,” who is pregnant?” He had a crazy look in his eyes so I was scared to tell him that he is going to be a grandpa. but I told him. He didn’t say anything he just dropped the gun and said, “let’s get to the hospital.” At the hospital we talked about it and that’s the first time I’ve ever seen him cry in front of me. He had mixed emotions he just said as long as you are happy I will always be there for you.
Josh
Friday, April 10, 2009
4 robberies
Well I robbed four people to provide for my drug addiction. I let my addiction get out of control. I was using cocain and I ran out of money to buy more. So when that happened I had to make a choice either to quit or go out and rob four people and so I chose to go and rob the four people to get money to provide and contribute to my drug addiction.
On some days I regret what I did and other days I am clad that I did it. Im clad I did it because I would not be were I am now I would probably be dead or strung out on the corner or dead. An on the days when I regret what I did I really wish I didn’t do it because that year and a half I did was not easy if you if you have ever done a year and a half straight.
Zack
Well I robbed four people to provide for my drug addiction. I let my addiction get out of control. I was using cocain and I ran out of money to buy more. So when that happened I had to make a choice either to quit or go out and rob four people and so I chose to go and rob the four people to get money to provide and contribute to my drug addiction.
On some days I regret what I did and other days I am clad that I did it. Im clad I did it because I would not be were I am now I would probably be dead or strung out on the corner or dead. An on the days when I regret what I did I really wish I didn’t do it because that year and a half I did was not easy if you if you have ever done a year and a half straight.
Zack
Narrative: Body Paragraphs
“I want to stay with you, I promise not to get in your way,” she said: without a thought I said “that sounds good with me little mama with a salacious smirk”. On our way out something did not feel right, but ignored the intuition. And as quick as heart beat came out the two females that I had been talking with for some time.
“What the F**K IS THIS S**T C-ZAR we are not good enough or what” both screaming Alicia and Sammy. Lila being in state of shock oblivious on what is happening leaned over asked, “what is going on here C-zar”? Standing there dumbfounded for a second finally saying its not what it portrays.
Then with a vigorous sarcastic tone Sammy said okay tell us C-zar what in the hell is you doing with this b*** huh. Now all three of them looking at me like a bunch of vultures waiting for a chance to peck my tongue
Ceasar
“What the F**K IS THIS S**T C-ZAR we are not good enough or what” both screaming Alicia and Sammy. Lila being in state of shock oblivious on what is happening leaned over asked, “what is going on here C-zar”? Standing there dumbfounded for a second finally saying its not what it portrays.
Then with a vigorous sarcastic tone Sammy said okay tell us C-zar what in the hell is you doing with this b*** huh. Now all three of them looking at me like a bunch of vultures waiting for a chance to peck my tongue
Ceasar
Narrative: Body Paragraphs
How we meet
I was a cheerleader at Kearns high. Ismael was on the basketball team and was known around the school. I saw him before and I thought he was cute and I wanted to talk to him but I was to shy to talk to him. Wednesday after school we had a game playing against Hunter High and we lost the game. Ismael was mad that they lost to them. I saw that he was mad so I walked up to him and said nice game and he looked up and smiled. He asked me “ what’s your name?” I said “ Aubrey”. I began to blush and looked down.
He said “ I’ll see you later” “ ok bye”
Saturday I went to a party at my homeboy Chino’s house.
Aubrey
I was a cheerleader at Kearns high. Ismael was on the basketball team and was known around the school. I saw him before and I thought he was cute and I wanted to talk to him but I was to shy to talk to him. Wednesday after school we had a game playing against Hunter High and we lost the game. Ismael was mad that they lost to them. I saw that he was mad so I walked up to him and said nice game and he looked up and smiled. He asked me “ what’s your name?” I said “ Aubrey”. I began to blush and looked down.
He said “ I’ll see you later” “ ok bye”
Saturday I went to a party at my homeboy Chino’s house.
Aubrey
Friday, April 3, 2009
Narrative: Body Paragraphs
The day we left is the day I will always remember. Everyone is crying and hugging. My dad and my brother are packing up the motor home. My sisters upstairs not wanting to come outside. My mom is giving us a last hug good bye before we go on our way. My dad starts the motor home and we start our way to the desert.
The day started to become the night. All we thought about the whole ride was leaving our mom. We arrived at my dads parents house around dinnertime or so. They were kind enough to let my dad, brother and I stay with them until my dad found us a house to stay in. My grandparents watched us while my dad worked for weeks at a time. They enrolled my brother and I in school and got us started with everything that we needed to do.
My brother and I got to visit our mom in Riverside every other weekend. My dad lived about two hours away so they both would drive half way. We would always meet at the chicken house and have lunch before my mom would drive us to her house. Each time we were able to see her it made the week so much better. I looked forward to those weekends a lot. During the week, I would think of things I would be able to do with my mom so that we got the best out of each visit.
After a couple of years after the split made dad had made a decision. He wanted to move to Utah with his new girlfriend. We weren’t allowed to see our mom as much because it was to far for us to go. So we tried to call her all of the time. After we moved I started getting into a lot more trouble and having even more problems. I only have gotten to see my mom about three times and I’ve lived in Utah about five years. But I call her as much as I can to see how everything is.
Kelsee
The day started to become the night. All we thought about the whole ride was leaving our mom. We arrived at my dads parents house around dinnertime or so. They were kind enough to let my dad, brother and I stay with them until my dad found us a house to stay in. My grandparents watched us while my dad worked for weeks at a time. They enrolled my brother and I in school and got us started with everything that we needed to do.
My brother and I got to visit our mom in Riverside every other weekend. My dad lived about two hours away so they both would drive half way. We would always meet at the chicken house and have lunch before my mom would drive us to her house. Each time we were able to see her it made the week so much better. I looked forward to those weekends a lot. During the week, I would think of things I would be able to do with my mom so that we got the best out of each visit.
After a couple of years after the split made dad had made a decision. He wanted to move to Utah with his new girlfriend. We weren’t allowed to see our mom as much because it was to far for us to go. So we tried to call her all of the time. After we moved I started getting into a lot more trouble and having even more problems. I only have gotten to see my mom about three times and I’ve lived in Utah about five years. But I call her as much as I can to see how everything is.
Kelsee
Narrative Introduction
My introduction of my life
Well when I was 16, I decided that I would be cool to go and do four aggregated armed robberies. I wanted drugs and alcohol that is what I wanted to do with my life. Things have changed now that I had done a year and a half in juvenile prison called Decker lake youth center. It was a good experience for me. I learned a lot about what could happen to me if I would have went to prison. I would not be here writing this paper and doing this assignment just an example. I would not see the light of day for 20 to 60 years that’s what I could have gotten if I would have got charged as an adult. I would be stuck for a long time but its all good to me. I did what I did and I cant change that the fact that I did it so yea.
Well when I was 16, I decided that I would be cool to go and do four aggregated armed robberies. I wanted drugs and alcohol that is what I wanted to do with my life. Things have changed now that I had done a year and a half in juvenile prison called Decker lake youth center. It was a good experience for me. I learned a lot about what could happen to me if I would have went to prison. I would not be here writing this paper and doing this assignment just an example. I would not see the light of day for 20 to 60 years that’s what I could have gotten if I would have got charged as an adult. I would be stuck for a long time but its all good to me. I did what I did and I cant change that the fact that I did it so yea.
Narrative Introduction
Introduction of my life
Have you had a weird vibe that you knew cant be explained, but knew it was something that simply cant be right? That’s what I felt on a chilly November night walking from a concert with a female I just met. We had a good time at the concert with each other. Before the show came to a closing I offered her ride home. She accepted my offer. While in the process starting my car I found out the engine blew out.
Ceasar
Have you had a weird vibe that you knew cant be explained, but knew it was something that simply cant be right? That’s what I felt on a chilly November night walking from a concert with a female I just met. We had a good time at the concert with each other. Before the show came to a closing I offered her ride home. She accepted my offer. While in the process starting my car I found out the engine blew out.
Ceasar
Narrative Introduction
Inner peace, it’s hard to find when you are only 10 years old and your mind is being constantly manipulated by your own step dad. Maybe he did it because of his own insecurities. Or maybe it really was my fault, and I was just too young to put the puzzle together. Now that I have been blamed for so I long I cant help but always blame my self for things.
Austin
Austin
Narrative Introduction
Me and Ismael’s relationship
“ Hurry up, we’re going to miss the show.” said Ismael from the living room. “ Today of all days you want to go to the movies this early.” If it only were sometime later after work.” So we don’t have to rush to go to the movies. “ Aubrey lets go we have to go.”
This was the beginning of the day that I wish would have never happened.
-Aubrey
“ Hurry up, we’re going to miss the show.” said Ismael from the living room. “ Today of all days you want to go to the movies this early.” If it only were sometime later after work.” So we don’t have to rush to go to the movies. “ Aubrey lets go we have to go.”
This was the beginning of the day that I wish would have never happened.
-Aubrey
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