Friday, October 31, 2008

Rewriting Lord of the Flies

Ralph blows the conch and everything goes crazy! Lava suddenly erupts from the mountain and spills down the valley. The kids started to go wild. They started ripping each others limbs off and drinking each others blood while pigs wildly ran after them and attacked their toes. Then all of a sudden a B-52 bomber drops off a cargo load of semi, and fully automatic m-15 army issue machine guns fully loaded with armor piercing rounds. Piggy grabs one of the machine guns and he starts to unload. “Die punks!” he said with a devils rage in his eyes.

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

i have never read the book but i already like your version dude haha good job keep it up

Nick P (1)

Anonymous said...

That is one of the most crazy journals I have ever read-regan

Anonymous said...

Why did you have to run

Mark W.

Anonymous said...

hahaha man cant beleive you ran, i like your version of the story though.
-nathan

Anonymous said...

yo evan though your not even here i still wanted to comment your stuff just in case you come back but although i dont remember the book very well i do remember bits and pieces of what you are talking about but you should calm down on the dramatic use of your language, the book wasn't that good


zack

Anonymous said...

i heve read that book and is relly interesting