Friday, April 3, 2009

Narrative Introduction

Me and Ismael’s relationship


“ Hurry up, we’re going to miss the show.” said Ismael from the living room. “ Today of all days you want to go to the movies this early.” If it only were sometime later after work.” So we don’t have to rush to go to the movies. “ Aubrey lets go we have to go.”
This was the beginning of the day that I wish would have never happened.

-Aubrey

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

you did good but you could have been more descriptive like wqho it the person calling you!-kirra

Anonymous said...

I like the foreshadowing you used at the very end. It summarizes the readers questions. Good entry!

Nick B.