Introduction of my life
Have you had a weird vibe that you knew cant be explained, but knew it was something that simply cant be right? That’s what I felt on a chilly November night walking from a concert with a female I just met. We had a good time at the concert with each other. Before the show came to a closing I offered her ride home. She accepted my offer. While in the process starting my car I found out the engine blew out.
Ceasar
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I really think that was a good intro to start out with. maybe start with a little more detail.
Tayler
Oh dang dude that is some crappy luck. sounds like a good story though.
alex
That was a really good beginning paragraph. I think you could work on more information in it because then we could understand where you are going with it.
-Aubrianna (1)
This is a way good intro to your story. Like Kesha said, it's good that you have the company, but if it's a girl that you just met it might be kinda awkward. I can't wait to raed more.
~Rachel
More detail. But that would suck if that happened to me. Ha ha. It's a good start though.
Kelsee 4th
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